Hi again, this is a story i wrote its called, 

TIGER
''swish, swish, swish,'' went the trees. ''shhhh'' went the people in their houses, as the tiger slowly crept out from behind the bush towards his prey his big paws suddenly pounced and the tiger let out a big ''ROAR!!!!!''

The people were terrified what the tiger had eaten, the villagers tried to slowly come out and wind the tiger away. He had eaten a male deer. then, the glimmering gold and jet black tiger ran away to find some more food for him to eat.

The only thing left was blood and the deers humongous golden antlers.
By Renee 

please comment!!!